19800809031 发表于 2012-6-9 15:26   全显示 1楼
感觉作者这篇写得有些仓促，戏份与细节描述不足，例如文中说“让给女儿留个记号”，什么意思，为什么不继续啊，唉，隔靴搔痒啊，不过情节摊铺得很丰富，不仅有作者与女儿、还有丈夫的父亲和妹妹，希望作者不要着急，俗话说慢工出细活，牢牢把握住父亲与女儿婷婷之间的关系为主线娓娓道来，如果出现婷婷与公公之间的关系不失为一种点缀。
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