賊 发表于 2012-6-22 10:07   全显示 1楼
文章取材比较新颖，古代皇宫剧，看起来应该是非常的淫乱生活。楼主描写的剧情非常完善。看起来非常舒服，故事介绍的非常细腻，情节描写的很生动。剧情发展顺畅对非色剧情的描写非常细，但是让大家看起来着急老是进入不到故事高潮。色的过程描写也很好，做爱时人物动作心理搭配的合理。就是文章太长了看起来比较累。
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